"But that L-shaped rip on the left sleeve got bigger, bits of stuffing coughed out from its wound after a hard day of play. I finally scotch-taped it close, but in rain or cold weather the tape peeled off like a scab and more stuffing fell out until that sleeve shriveled into a palsied arm."
I really liked this quote because of the metaphors. Things like “coughed out from its wound” really catches your eye. I makes you care about and understand how the author feels.
And only 2 minutes into the game… I smell barbeque Quite hungry, in fact And I’m VERY glad I brought my jacket/cape because it’s chilly. Sophia is playing music w/ Turtle, Erika is asleep (but pretending to be awake :C), and this game is looking hopeless This is really fun, if only I could get a messaging plan…:-(